Beauty Snare
Is there anything to follow here?
Pretty Broken Thing
The desolation stood before me
in a broken pallet of color
No bright flower would bloom
and my feet smoldered
in the rising heat of the pounding sun
Where the light hit the ground
the ground withered
Standing on the brink of nothing
I watch as they slowly waltz by
in a dance of downcast heads
How it could stand and not fall
I could not see
A ring snares my ear
as the pressure thickens
and the hot becomes unbearable
Even the vultures
will not take of the dead things here
Broken beauty is more hideous
than something that never was…
I want to know if there is a cohesive thought here, pleas tell me what you think…
It seems that the inspiration flows out from one side of the brain and is often not (immediately) understood by the other. Take comfort in the fact that this is often a sign of great creative genius. My advice is to not try and force a meaning from it. It will come when it is processed by both sides. There is great cohesion in this poem, but I think it will be better not to tell you what I think of it. I think you might be interested in reading a book called "Blink," which deals with the two very different paths used to form a conclusion - the analytic and the intuitive. You are a great intuitive artist. That's a gift most of us can only wish for. Don't sweat the small stuff. More to follow later.
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